This is my first render of my project- it took about 2 hours to render so I am hoping to only render it out once more max. Im hoping that this render will display any tweaks that need to be made - since its always difficult to tell when you watch it through via ram preview at 25 percent.
Changes that I have noticed that need to be changed:
The hand at the start needs to enter and exit the frame faster- this is easily changed by altering the positioning.
The first time the girl walks alone across screen needs to either take up less time (which is going to be tricky since everything from that point has a specific timing point to the song). To rectify this I could include another scene (again tricky since I have run out of scene ideas). Or make it so the girl moves a bit slower across the screen so theres more to look at and it ends with the girl moving out or frame rather than sitting on the music notes.
Keep an eye on the swans feet as sometimes (mostly in the desert scene) they don't walk on the ground.
Fix the twilight scene, as the ground doesn't move right away - simple change to make just move a keyframe.
Fix the last moose close-up it seems like its took close and appears out of focus- again easily changed.
Add in music notes to the swan and moose close-ups since they would be in frame.
Fix the grass in the very end scene which pops into existence rather than appearing all along.
Add in a little credit to both the band and myself at the end.
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